Post by NostalgiaX on Dec 18, 2007 22:14:41 GMT -5
Alright, bro. You wanted me to be your RP sensei, right?
Let me start off by saying, I'm not the best, nor am I really good. I just know a thing or two.
I'll grab a quote from you and show you how it should be done.
That qute should have been posted something like this:
"CJ!" Yugo shouted. "What the heck is so funny, that you have to laugh for no raisen?!" He said, rolling his r's and intentionally mispronouncing "reason."
Lesson 1
Try to use full sentences and quotation marks.
I might know exactly what's going on most of the time, but that's because we share the same brain.
Other people don't really know how we see it, so we have to use full sentences and describe what's going on.
Lesson 2
Describe the situation, painting a vivid picture in your reader's mind.
Something like this:
CJ held his right hand out in front of him. He spread his fingers apart, pointing to the sky. "♪Stop! In the naaaaame of looooooove!♪" He began singing in his usually annoying voice, with a bright smile painted on his face. As he sang, he began bouncing up and down, without getting off of the ground.
Try to put these two lessons together in one reply.
EDIT
Heh... Oops, I forgot to make it the same way as an RP. I posted this as if I were talking to you. Oh, well.
Fixed post:
Let me start off by saying, I'm not the best, nor am I really good. I just know a thing or two.
I'll grab a quote from you and show you how it should be done.
ipittythefoo said:
"Cj"! "what the heck is so funny that you have to laugh for no raisen"!That qute should have been posted something like this:
"CJ!" Yugo shouted. "What the heck is so funny, that you have to laugh for no raisen?!" He said, rolling his r's and intentionally mispronouncing "reason."
Lesson 1
Try to use full sentences and quotation marks.
I might know exactly what's going on most of the time, but that's because we share the same brain.
Other people don't really know how we see it, so we have to use full sentences and describe what's going on.
Lesson 2
Describe the situation, painting a vivid picture in your reader's mind.
Something like this:
CJ held his right hand out in front of him. He spread his fingers apart, pointing to the sky. "♪Stop! In the naaaaame of looooooove!♪" He began singing in his usually annoying voice, with a bright smile painted on his face. As he sang, he began bouncing up and down, without getting off of the ground.
Try to put these two lessons together in one reply.
EDIT
Heh... Oops, I forgot to make it the same way as an RP. I posted this as if I were talking to you. Oh, well.
Fixed post:
